Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In some periods of life, individuals will encounter a multitude of challenges and predicaments, which will emerge unanticipatedly. In these situations, some people opine that acceptance is the most effective way in order to deal with such situations, while opponents propose that we should make efforts to improve them. From my vantage point, I utterly approve of the second opinion, which will be dissected with specific rationales in the essay below.
On the one hand, choosing to come to terms with unsatisfactory lives may help people for several reasons. First, it is noticeable that sometimes the more people try to enhance the situation that they don’t understand properly, the more they are likely to worsen it. In unfavourable conditions, people tend to think less critically, which hinders the wise decision-making and leads to unexpected failures. Second, dwellers who accept their fate have nothing to do with the situation. For instance, Keanu Reeves is basically the most righteous and devoted actor in Hollywood, and he used to have a struggling period of life. During the time of casting Matrix, his unborn infant was dead, and later his lovely wife had a catastrophic car accident and was found deceased. For the time being, his life was filled with trauma and depression but afterwards, he chose to leave the past behind and continued his career.
On the other hand, taking attempts to ameliorate bad situations sometimes not only make changes to our life but also provide us with invaluable lessons. As the old adage once said: Making effort is better than none, we can comprehend how essential it is to put the knowledge and effort into practice. As a result, we are able to actively control the whole situation as well as learn more about novel things around the predicaments. To illustrate, at present, Lil Nas X is considered as a talented singer in the US but he had a suffering time during his career path. He had been kicked out of the house due to private conflicts and had to live in his brother’s house for a while, which caused him to have an illness anxiety disorder. However, he overcame obstacles by beginning a music career and produced one of the most famous songs of all time: Old Town Road.
In conclusion, while acceptance sometimes is a good choice, every effort to improve the situation is admirable. We should keep a cool head under a circumstance as it is essential to have an appropriate assessment of details before making sensible decisions. Also, we should remember that some predicaments are unchanged, so learning to accept and live along with them is the key to success and peace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95045045045 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83341837338 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 176.041082164 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1092791139 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.684210526 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3684210526 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134319196061 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384699758849 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391412895894 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818921115029 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174935335292 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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