Nowadays the crime rate is increasing, especially among teenagers.
In the present world, the crime rate involving teenagers is rapidly escalating. The number of cases of crime has not only increased in comparison to the past decade but also the people doing the crimes have changed. Also, there is a change in the pattern and type of crime.
Adding to the above, the reason behind the crimes has changed. Previously, the crimes were committed by people without any work and to feed the family. They had not only limited resources to accomplish the crime but also didn't have the greed. People from the previous generation believed in hard work. Coming to the present, teenagers and young adults are more focused on earning quickly than earning honestly. Also, they want to apply all sorts of shortcuts to achieve success than working hard. This mindset is brought on to them mostly with those good-for-nothing television serials and movies. These shows portray that committing these crimes will not only make them look cooler but also will have no consequences. Teenagers are not very mature and impressionable minds. They get easily swayed with all this flashy and cool stuff.
Further on, this trend is definitely not a favorable situation. This needs to be nipped at the bud than crying later. One of the possible actions that could be taken to control, would be to engage the kids more in physical activities than giving them time to watch television and movies. Also, parents should definitely supervise their kid's daily shows, their friend circle and spend more quality time with them. They should be made aware that doing such activities in movies is possible but in reality, it has consequences and would eventually spoil the future. Another possible action is that censor boards for television and movies should have stricter rules for the content of the show. This could help reduce the wrong exposure the kids are getting and slowly decrease the crime rate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ources to accomplish the crime but also didnt have the greed. People from the previou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97178683386 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42136174468 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567398119122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.67413696 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.95 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156074058735 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520509798136 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675015077103 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138216498761 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104806530691 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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