disadvantages of living in city
Nowadays, cities become more and more crowded. Despite having many advantages such as having more opportunities of jobs,living standards,…., living in a city has many drawbacks which cities are face to
First, pollutants like pesticides, plastic,chemicals,… from factories, peoples and transport are too much and it is so harmful for citizens. It leads to lung cancer, asthma. For instance, factories dump chemicals, oil, pesticides,… in rivers that makes rivers contaminated. Motor vehicles, aircraft burn fossil fuels that contributes to the greenhouse effect, global warming and polar ice melting.
Second, traffic congestion in the city is also a big problem. it causes problems such as slow working hours and it also causes environmental pollution. For example, Many people parked their cars in the wrong lane, parents parked their cars waiting for their children to finish school and many sellers were on the road causing traffic congestion.
In conclusion, The aforementioned harms are so common in our lives now, we need to do to reduce these harms to make the city better and better
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , living
...uch as having more opportunities of jobs,living standards,…., living in a city has many...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...e opportunities of jobs,living standards,…., living in a city has many drawbacks w...
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Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... many drawbacks which cities are face to First, pollutants like pesticides, plast...
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Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , chemicals
...rst, pollutants like pesticides, plastic,chemicals,… from factories, peoples and transport...
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Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...actories dump chemicals, oil, pesticides,… in rivers that makes rivers contaminate...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...tion in the city is also a big problem. it causes problems such as slow working ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39306358382 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15054885708 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682080924855 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8073297169 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170886686939 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636148414674 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727995656827 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108849398619 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954643066803 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.