History is one of the compulsory school subjects. some people think that now science and technology are more important than history.
History is an important subject for knowing your past. In history, we can get the statics of different tradition of inhabitants. Which help us to understand the different nation. Also, it helps us in understanding the own nation before where they stand and now a time they are increasing side or on decreasing side. We also get some positive habits of the past inhabitants and implement nowadays. For example, in past, most of the families living together care each other. A very good bounding between the relationship, which history tells us. But nowadays totally different.
We also cannot neglect the importance of science and technology. It makes an incredible change in our lives. It is not possible to continue education without getting the information of science and technology. Technology can enhance every part of life. For example, before people anywhere they don't know about the area's atmosphere, location, and required time to reach there. Due to technology on the mobile phone, any person can get this information easily and accurately.
History and technology have their own pros and cons. I think so technology is more important than history. Because if you live in the past so you will stick yourself. It is a very important part of life to live in the current situation and improve yourself, without technology it is not possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...s one of the compulsory school subject. some people thinks that, now science and tec...
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Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of different tradition of inhabitants. Which help us to understanding the different ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... to understanding the different nation. Also it helps us in understanding the own na...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...s of the past inhabitants and implement now a days. For example, in past most of the famil...
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Line 2, column 392, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... the past inhabitants and implement now a days. For example, in past most of the famil...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...elationship, which history tell us. But now a days totally different. We also cannot negl...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ionship, which history tell us. But now a days totally different. We also cannot negl...
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Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...art of life. For example, before people any where they donot know about the areas atmosph...
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Suggestion: areas'; area's
...ple any where they donot know about the areas atmosphere, location and required time ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hnology have its own pros and cons. But i think so technology is more important t...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'stick'
Suggestion: stick
...use if you live in the past so you will stuck yourself. It is very important part of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98393574297 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79385326001 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562248995984 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9060547291 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.05 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.45 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.95 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289944484292 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899252376952 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107268211092 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228400481203 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176737427698 0.056905535591 311% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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