Employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress at work. They should only care about the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree??
It is generally known that people in different industries follow various dress codes, while some individuals maintain that bosses should pay more attention to recruiters' working performances rather than their dressing requirements. From my perspective, it is necessary for certain sectors to have strict dressing rules.
On the one hand, even though the performance of a worker plays a significant role in their workplace, we can not ignore that one's appearance sometimes can make a huge difference. One major reason is that employees' images have a profound impact on the profile of a company. For example, for those who are working in service sectors like a hotel manager wear a tidy suit can make a good impression of being well-trained on customers, for which customers are more likely to come back and enjoy the good service of the hotel again. In other words, a uniformed staff can improve the companies' images as well as bring a prospective profit to his workplace.
On the other hand, being well-dressed enables staffs to improve their working outcomes. People who work in industries that need to interact constantly with clients should think highly of their outfits because the public usually considers that people who dress casually might be not reliable. With this in mind, in order to show professional images, it is better for professionals, such as lawyers, doctors or businessmen and so on, to dress up well to convince other people that they are trusted, which to some extent results in a visible achievement.
To summarize, although there are some negative impacts on regulations of employees' outfits, I still believe that the benefits of wearing uniforms are far more, not only improving the honour of a business, but also generating more positive outcomes for the staff.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15017064846 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82801938198 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5325456793 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.9 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180637376671 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721451480309 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644249969345 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106111810527 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648787935538 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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