Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in a rural area. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the countryside.
Some individuals believe that towns are better places for living rather than the countryside; some others reckon that cities are not suitable choices for living. Nowadays, urbanism is becoming popular day by day because of many options and opportunities in cities especially metropolises; while, people who live in towns may face some issues and difficulties.
To commence with benefits, there are many facilities in towns that can't be seen in the countryside; for example, schools and universities in towns provide pupils with optional classrooms and advanced buildings. Moreover, most of the professors and lecturers live in cities and it will not be easy for them to make face-to-face communications with their rural students. In addition, we have many occupation opportunities in towns despite suburbs and this can create an inner tendency for people particularly young people to apply for a job in cities and experience the modern lifestyle; in other words, people can earn more money in cities and follow their dreams.
On the other hand, urbanites deal with some problems; for instance, traffic congestion is one of the most notorious issues in cities. As a drawback for urbanites, traffic jam can cause several problems to people; for example, people usually get stressed and they will not be able to manage or economize their time. Furthermore, people who live in towns often have hectic schedules and a huge part of their time spends on working on account of high living costs in cities; hence, they have not adequate time to spend that with their friends and family and they may face some physical or mental health issues downing the road.
To recapitulate, if you want to increase your income or continue your education in top schools and universities, you had better emigrate from rural regions to cities; needless to say, being an urbanite have its own difficulties thus it is better to be ready for dealing with problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...there are many facilities in towns that cant be seen in the countryside; for example...
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Line 6, column 493, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng costs in cities; hence, they have not adequate time to spend that with their f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13836477987 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76311863151 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569182389937 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.555555556 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3333333333 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219997509011 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103798136254 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835107806379 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14433640223 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968679655252 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.