Dear Sir/Mam
I am writing this letter to you to show my interest in the position of a chemistry lecture that was advertised by you on glassdoor yesterday.
I had completed my master's in honors school chemistry and masters in education that is the main requirement to get a job in the teaching profession. Also, I reviewed the job description provided by you to understand the job responsibilities and found that I am the perfect match for the position of chemistry lecturer.
Furthermore, I am an enthusiastic learner who always shows my willingness to update my existing knowledge by joining a highly reputable company. I assure you that I will give my best performance and will work honestly that will enhance the productivity of the organization.
Additionally, I have five years of teaching experience in a private high school that is an assert to continue my profession with your company.
I will look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Preet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rience in a private high school that is an assert to continue my profession with your com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, honestly, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01234567901 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20407833391 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6994822459 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178434761565 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767514206632 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672912308468 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995716983754 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706131540479 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.