Human activity has had a negative impact on the sustainability of the environment. In fact, not many people care about this problem. Do you agree or disagree ?
In today’s world, the term “environment” is extremely familiar to every one of us and every individual is responsible for protecting the environment from pollution and being exploited by human activities. In fact, there are not many people concern about this problem. According to The World Count (2020), if human activities keep on exploiting the environment without control, the world's natural resources will run out soon. Humankind would certainly struggle against a shortage in daily food consumed, a lack of fresh air to breath, and drainage of water usage. In order to prevent the environment from its degradation, raising people’s awareness of recent environmental issues has not only been an individual business, it’s must be supported by the whole community. Moreover, participating in some environmental projects or activities also encouraged us to have an insight into the issue that we are tackling.
First and foremost, to prevent the environment from being destroyed steadily, the government should enact stricter laws to restrict the illegal activities that cause harm to the environment. According to Dr. Ibaba (2010), Environmental Protection Laws and Sustainable Development in the Niger Delta, the enforcement of the laws are considered to be one of the major features of the conservation of the resources in the Niger delta; nevertheless, the government still pay little attention to this. In fact, the waste bumped yearly directly into rivers and black smoke includes fatal substances from factories’ chimney is seriously considered. According to the Industrial Waste Management: Waste Stream Statistics in 2007, “While the U.S. produces around 236 million tons of municipal solid waste every year, the numbers for industrial waste are far less clear. Some estimates go as high as 7.6 billion tons of industrial waste produced every year”. Once the new law requires factories or small independent businesses to eliminate their domestic or industrial wastes by setting up waste treatment throughout the production process, it would worth a helping hand to lessen the degradation of the environment stability.
Secondly, in order not to exacerbate the environmental condition, one and all must start by taking small actions which certainly bring big change (Hilton 2020). Volunteer to become an activist in environmental campaigns is strongly encouraged in all variety of ages, especially teenagers. Currently, there are numerous non-profit and non-governmental organizations that are in charge of acknowledging the residents about our struggles with today’s world resources. Those who have a chance to be a member of any campaign would constantly change their attitudes and behavior which is beneficial for the environment to regenerate its condition. Furthermore, the educational campaign has proved its absolute effect on the residents in the way they act and think towards their waste and its opportunities for the whole community to become more environmentally conscious (Grodzińska-Jurczak et al., 2006). At this time, we have been dealing with the outbreak of the Coronavirus pandemic which prevents us from working, going to school, taking part in any social activities. In some ways, it offers us more chances to approach environmental sustainability. For instance, one of the most outstanding campaigns that contribute to the acknowledge residents which are run over the globe named Vitamin N. By bringing people to nature and wildlife through the screen, this projects has positively influenced ordinary people to raise environmental consciousness and has encouraged their changes to be more ecologically-responsible behavior in their daily life.
An advocate for the protection of renewable energy, famous for being the first person to walk on both Poles, Robert Swan (2012), stated that “The greatest threat to our planet is the belief that someone else will save it”. Each of us has the responsibility for rescuing and sustaining nature. Moreover, natural resources are indispensable to people in everyday lives, without it, we hardly can continue to survive. Stated by Kaiser, F.G (1999), “Shrinking natural resources, overwhelmed landfill sites, pollution, the depletion of the ozone layer, and the greenhouse effect challenge human existence”. In addition, standing up and taking responsibility towards our environment before human exploitation completely depletes them is our duty because the Earth has given us natural services for humans and all other species which are fundamental to our well-being, the standard of living, and the chance of survival. For example, The key to address this problem is to start acting from small steps, and once you find it easier to start recycling or sorting domestic waste, you will be amazed how it affects our way of living (“Why Is It Important to Care About the Environment?”, 2021).
On the whole, each and every one of us should actively volunteer to take part in the progress of recovering our environment. If we continually take advantage of nature for economic growth without aware of its sustainability, we will have nothing left within years since most of the resources are non-renewable. Additionally, being informed of the importance of conserving the environment is also initial because “The generation that destroys the environment is not the generation that pays the price” (Maathai, W., 2009). We have to put ourselves in the environment’s position to forewarning about the catastrophic consequences that we going to suffer; otherwise, we will accidentally put an end to humans’ extinction.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1218, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...utstanding campaigns that contribute to the acknowledge residents which are run over the globe ...
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Line 7, column 434, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: G
...ontinue to survive. Stated by Kaiser, F.G 1999, “Shrinking natural resources, ove...
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Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...e Environment?”, 2021. On the whole, each and every one of us should actively volunteer to take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 13.1623246493 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 128.0 41.998997996 305% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 37.0 8.3376753507 444% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4756.0 1615.20841683 294% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 861.0 315.596192385 273% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52380952381 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.41689962084 4.20363070211 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25587586066 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 444.0 176.041082164 252% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515679442509 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1465.2 506.74238477 289% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 13.0 2.52805611222 514% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 15.0 4.76152304609 315% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 16.0721442886 193% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9860806924 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.419354839 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7741935484 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22580645161 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159980853688 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458470658124 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714845987552 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959271488012 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529597107527 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 253.0 78.4519038076 322% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1218, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...utstanding campaigns that contribute to the acknowledge residents which are run over the globe ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 434, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: G
...ontinue to survive. Stated by Kaiser, F.G 1999, “Shrinking natural resources, ove...
^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...e Environment?”, 2021. On the whole, each and every one of us should actively volunteer to take...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 13.1623246493 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 128.0 41.998997996 305% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 37.0 8.3376753507 444% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4756.0 1615.20841683 294% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 861.0 315.596192385 273% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52380952381 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.41689962084 4.20363070211 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25587586066 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 444.0 176.041082164 252% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515679442509 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1465.2 506.74238477 289% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 13.0 2.52805611222 514% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 15.0 4.76152304609 315% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 16.0721442886 193% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9860806924 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.419354839 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7741935484 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22580645161 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159980853688 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458470658124 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714845987552 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959271488012 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529597107527 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 253.0 78.4519038076 322% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.