There is no denying the fact that discipline any crucial pivotal role in human beings lives. Therefore, the teenage individual considers whether nowadays then to reduce politeness and respect compare to the past. I agree with this notion and I will explain views with effects and solution in the upcoming paragraph.
Commencing with the most salient effect why young people in reduce polite and respectful in today time. They prefer to more spent on technology equipment, they neither respect of elder, nor do like to talk with them. Owing to this, the major effect is that it is removed of relationship bond between elder people and young people. Moreover, majority of teenager prefers to live alone their life, it is fact despite infants come in depression condition. Nonetheless, alone time not only bad impact on health, but also they forget to respect rules in life. Ergo, it is clear enough of upcoming generation in changes compare to past.
On the other side, the ample number of solution for changing the lifestyle of their children more important in today's time. However, parents ought to neither more time spent with their infants, nor concentrate adequately on children studies. Whereas, nowadays the more open education centre for studies, the more opportunities for children in the modern era. For example, they are tremendously to need politeness and respect in living life, since it is seen discipline more change do life, in addition to it create of personality than past.
To sum up, due to discipline it is a more significant role every people life, so parents should that healing care of the children in childhood and learns about benefit politeness and respect in life .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t benefit politeness and respect in life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60506485294 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6805644404 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180541339804 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631401963788 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544033492277 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110228511895 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277208300303 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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