The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows the distribution of travellers' arrivals in North America, Central and Eastern Europe, South-Asia, Sub-Saharian Africa and South America from 1990 to 2005.
Firstly, the main aspect that can be observed is a gradual, althoug slight, increase in visitors towards Sub-Saharian continent and South America, their arrivals grew up approximatly of ten millions in this 15 years period.
Furthermore, a constant rise in arrivals was described for South-East Asia travellers and for Central and Eastern Europe ones. European visitors reached their highest peak in 2005, growing up f...
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Why 0% of passice voice? The
Why 0% of passice voice? The sentence "..the main aspect that can be observed.." is not a passive one?
here 'Use of Passive Voice
here 'Use of Passive Voice (0%)' means Passive Voices are used wrongly.
Thanks for explanation!
Thanks for explanation!
Sentence: Firstly, the main aspect that can be observed is a gradual, althoug slight, increase in visitors towards Sub-Saharian continent and South America, their arrivals grew up approximatly of ten millions in this 15 years period.
Error: approximatly Suggestion: approximately
Error: althoug Suggestion: although
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 6 10
No. of Words: 168 200
No. of Characters: 906 1000
No. of Different Words: 112 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.6 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.393 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.799 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.733 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.902 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.149 0.07
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