In some parts of the world, it is vital for individuals to live in an own property rather than to be a tenant. This trend is primarily due to their social status and higher costs of the rented houses. This essay agrees that everyone being a house owner is a negative trend because of scarce lands.
Citizens of these countries have a long-lasting social stigma that being a tenant is inferior to being a landlord. In other words, for them, living in a very own home is an indicator of their prosperity and higher status of living. This is supported by a recent study conducted at university of Colombo, in which they claim that 97% of Sri Lankan doctors own a detached house. In addition to showing off good living conditions, elevated prices of rented apartments contribute to increase this drive. Put simply, letting a flat consumes significant proportions of individuals’ monthly vague, which is not worth in the long run; therefore, investing on a property is more popular than paying for someone else’s house. For instance, the annual newsletter of Central bank revealed that 95% of those aged 25 to 30 took out a mortgage in 2020.
That being said, everyone’s effort to purchase a place to live brings disadvantages to most of the people in the country due to the limited availability of space. It is clear that, were a high-rising apartment building to construct, it can house a huge number of families compared to a single family living in a big house, which has a large garden. Making things worse is that lands in city centers, where the congestion is a deteriorating problem, lands are sold to affordable people to build their own luxurious homes. Recently, some authoritative powers have identified detrimental effects of this trend and that is why Sri-Lankan government has set a target to completely ban selling lands to private owners by 2030.
In conclusion, people in some countries consider buying a home is vital to letting a flat. The principle causes for this behavior are ever-rising house rent and higher social status that can be built with an own property. However, this essay disagrees with this condition as it has negative effects on the vast majority of citizens due to the rapidly decreasing amounts of lands.
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In some parts of the world,…
In some parts of the world, it is vital for individuals to live in an own property rather than to be a tenant. This trend is primarily due to their social status and the higher costs of the rented houses. This essay agrees that everyone being a house owner is a negative trend because of scarce lands.
Citizens of these countries have a long-lasting social stigma that being a tenant is inferior to being a landlord. In other words, for them, living in a very own home is an indicator of their prosperity and higher status of living. This is supported by a recent study conducted at university of Colombo, in which they claim that 97% of Sri Lankan doctors own a detached house. In addition to showing off good living conditions, elevated prices of rented apartments contribute to increase this drive. Put simply, letting a flat consumes significant proportions of individuals’ monthly vague, which is not worth in the long run; therefore, investing on a property is more popular than paying for someone else’s house. For instance, the annual newsletter of Central bank revealed that 95% of those aged 25 to 30 took out a mortgage in 2020.
That being said, everyone’s effort to purchase a place to live brings disadvantages to most of the people in the country due to the limited availability of space. It is clear that, were a high-rising apartment building to construct, it can house a huge number of families compared to a single family living in a big house, which has a large garden. Making things worse is that lands in city centers, where the congestion is a deteriorating problem, lands are sold to affordable people to build their own luxurious homes. Recently, some authoritative powers have identified detrimental effects of this trend and that is why Sri Lankan government has set a target to completely ban selling lands to private owners by 2030.
In conclusion, people in some countries consider buying a home is vital to letting a flat. The principle causes for this behavior are ever-rising house rent and higher social status that can be built with an own property. However, this essay disagrees with this condition as it has negative effects on the vast majority of citizens due to the rapidly decreasing amounts of lands.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ace to live brings disadvantages to the most of people in the country due to the limited avail...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86753246753 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76434909275 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550649350649 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8578240757 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.125 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244320104597 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770675650123 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421496440757 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162804259816 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558478070869 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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