Having a successful career and a frutiful family life seems to many people the percect blending to reach a state of happiness. But what does it take to achieve this status? How many sacrifices are needed to overcome the obstacles on the path? This essay will analyze some aspects of this treacherous quest and give advertise on how to combine work and private life.
Especially over the last years, we have witnessed a steadily increasing interest in well-being, mental health, and job satisfaction. Too oft stress at work accounts for tensions within the family, lack of communication, and a general sense of dissatisfaction. Beside mental health problems, workers suffering from stress can go on to develop serious diseases like cardiovascular and muskuloskeletal problems. Furthermore the constant pressure some workers are exposed to in order to get promoted can be very high. Overtime, taking duties over for colleagues, working on weekends are usually the only way employees have to move forward in the company. As a consequence, people who aim to focus on their career have less time left to spend with their relatives.
On the other hand, investing energies on professional growth is essential to guarantee financial stability for the whole family. Along the basic elements that allow a group of people to survive, such as food, clothes, and education, there are other aspects that should be taken into account when it comes to speaking of an happy family life. Bein able to book holidays, purchase accessories, eat out, and cultivate hobbies, are all hallmarks of a stable financial situation.
We should also be aware of other aspects that maybe play a major role in drawing the picture of a happy family. Aspects that no money or advancement in career can ever buy. Mutual appreciation, trust, communication, love, support, are probabyl the only ingredients that guarantee happiness. I firmly believe that it is extremely hard to combine career and family happiness without sacrifice of any sort, without paying a price both in terms of health and personal relationship. Getting the perfect bleding between work and family can be treacherous.
What I recommend is basically to prioritize personal happiness and do not let the workplace devour your soul, your energies, and the people who love you because no matter how much money you earn, nothing can supersede the warmth of a family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, speaking of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16112531969 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88099442179 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6726487668 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.210526316 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267114111839 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683727688723 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08261960106 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136478631105 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092670240779 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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