You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to company
Complaining about this
Giving your reasons
Asking for bill to be changed
Dear Mr. ABC,
I am Airtel's regular prepaid customer for 3 years straight. I am satisfied with the telecom companies services for quiet long. but today, I have received a bill for my prepaid number and the thing that made me mad was that the international call charges were added for the previous month in this bill which I have not made for like 2 months as I had not used my phone for international calling. I will elaborate you further about this.
I have a cousin brother living in Canada whom I and my mother talks every night. Earlier that was done by my mobile number but nowadays my mother uses her own sim for the international calls to my cousin. As I have to do my office work from home and I am always busy due to this corona pandemic so I have stopped my international call service last month.
As I saw my mobile bill today for payment I was shocked to see international charges of Rs 5,000 were added to my current plan with domestic calls and putting my final amount to around 7,000. I tried to contact the complaint cell of the company but they didn't responded to my call.
I request you to please look into this matter as I have stopped my international calling services and I am attaching my application which I made to the company office for the cancellation of international services last month.
Thanks
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ecom companies services for quiet long. but today, I have received a bill for my pr...
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Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... complaint cell of the company but they didnt responded to my call. I request you t...
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Line 6, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ernational services last month. Thanks Yours faithfully, XYZ
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...last month. Thanks Yours faithfully, XYZ
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48987854251 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66378301909 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546558704453 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.00167521 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.818181818 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346950905759 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134729201168 0.0766984524023 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850769039481 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229955264471 0.12726935374 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979712879707 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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