The bar charts and line graph show the results of a survey conducted over a three-year period to discover what people who live in London think of the city.
The bar charts and line graph give information about the advantages and disadvantages of living in London according to the responses from residents over a period of three years.
According to the data given by the bar charts and line graph, it can be clearly seen that there is a fluctuating downward trend overall which is likely to be more prominent on the worst things than best things and major problems.
Having an analysis by the level of percentage, the range of shops, job opportunities and the mixture of people have remained on the top of positive aspects, in opposition to cost of livi...
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