The bar charts and line graph show the results of a survey conducted over a three-year period to discover what people who live in London think of the city.
The bar charts and line graph give information about the advantages and disadvantages of living in London according to the responses from residents over a period of three years.
According to the data given by the bar charts and line graph, it can be clearly seen that there is a fluctuating downward trend overall which is likely to be more prominent on the worst things than best things and major problems.
Having an analysis by the level of percentage, the range of shops, job opportunities and the mixture of people have remained on the top of positive aspects, in opposition to cost of livi...
- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. 70
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include a 80
- "Prevention is better than cure."Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 60
- Some people claim that what people eat in many Western countries is unhealthy and their diet is getting worse. Critics say that these countries should change their diet.What are your opinion on this? 60
- Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages? 75
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No. of Words: 253 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 253 200
No. of Characters: 1163 1000
No. of Different Words: 134 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.988 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.597 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.629 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.001 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.2 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.39 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.547 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.103 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4