Many people believe that increasing levels of violence on television and in films is
having a direct result on levels of violence in society. Others claim that violence in
society is the result of more fundamental social problems such as unemployment.
Discuss both views
The ever-increasing crime rate in the society is not just the consequence of the violence
portraited in cinemas now-a-days, but also prevalent due to the social issues such as
unemployment. This essay will discuss both these factors and also how it proliferates the
crime rate.
Cinema and television have been the most sought-after entertainment sources for the
public. The actors who act in the movies are admired by many, owing to which people
like imitating their actions. Although, an actor is just portraying a character, it influences
the common public to a great extent. Irrational individuals get influenced by violent and
crime related movies, and try to pull it off in real life. For example, a movie based on a
bank robbery named “Gangster” was released few years back, soon after that, a gang of
four people tried to commit the robbery. Once they were captured, they admitted that
their act was inspired by the movie Gangster. Therefore, Cinemas definitely motivate the
ones with a criminal mentality.
Another viewpoint states that, violence is a result of greater social concerns such as
poverty owing to joblessness. This is indeed one of the biggest reasons that drives an
individual to commit a felony. As per the recent study conducted by the state police
department on more than thousand robbers, 84% stated that they were short of money
and had to rob in order to survive. The act of violence that happen on the daily basis are
mostly self-intrigued.
In conclusion, both movies and social issues have a direct impact on the actions of
criminals, escalating the intensity and frequency of crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16728624535 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86687728462 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3602300121 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156636917829 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466038830993 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643228539815 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0403820589379 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665604440415 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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