Many people believe that crucial positions in the public are inappropriate for youth generations, while some people oppose that letting youngsters take on the positions might be a wise decision. In my opinion, it is crucial to appoint young workers to public office for betterment society.
First, it is necessary for the state machine to change the way to catch up with the times by enacting new laws and policies, and it can not be done without young people who have their minds updated with the development of society. In contrast to the old people, they might resolve the problems with more old, rigid, and less effective way. For instance, the old methods to propaganda the environmental protection policies through televisions or leaflets fewer practical impacts than interesting and creative activities organized by young celebrities or influencers.
On the other hand, in my opinion, even though the young people can come up with new ideas which are really necessary for social problems. They may not be experienced enough like old workforce to handle these issues. For instance, if an individual who comes across a major problem, he/she wants have a consultation with a person whom with more knowledge and experience.
In conclusion, it seems to me that although experience is required to work efficiently, but it is clear that neither all things can be done by the old age group nor by the senior age group. I believe that young people in some certain areas can provide better performance. Thus, young workers should be given a chance and they should be promoted.
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- Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04198473282 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76634364962 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0786031902 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.090909091 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3636363636 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268289216361 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104199575807 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100255349935 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174288178928 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918137588279 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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