The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades althought some of these changes have been negative the overall effect of this technology has been positive what are you opinions on this

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The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. althought some of these changes have been negative the overall effect of this technology has been positive .
what are you opinions on this?

Nowadays, society is delopvementing everyday and internet the most the development over the past few decades. besides that benifit ia brought by internet, internet has been changers negative people. This essay will suggest that improve information is the biggest advantage and effect heathy is the main disadvantage.

Firstly i am sure most people would agree that the internet has improved information. Instead people spend many hour on research information in the library, now the same information available online. Harvard university make a survey nowaday 65 per sent student use information on the internet instead library

secord, nowaday some people spent to many hour access the internet. Instead use internet for study and work nevertheless some one use it for meaningless affected heathy such as play game, watch intruction dangerous. The Time recently reported that 70 per cent peo use smartphone many time and passive improve negative heathy due to internet.

To include, i once again restate my view that internet has benifet is reseach information quickly and it affect negative for heathy people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
Nowadays, society is delopvementing everyday and internet the most the development o...
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Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
... development over the past few decades. besides that benifit ia brought by internet, in...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hy is the main disadvantage. Firstly i am sure most people would agree that th...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
... the internet has improved information. Instead people spend many hour on research info...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secord
...tion on the internet instead library secord, nowaday some people spent to many hour...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...spent to many hour access the internet. Instead use internet for study and work neverth...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...nternet for study and work nevertheless some one use it for meaningless affected heathy ...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...ted that 70 per cent peo use smartphone many time and passive improve negative heathy due...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...t is reseach information quickly and it affect negative for heathy people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47398843931 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77444604748 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8292855784 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.222222222 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148005406965 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661804247117 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047874381167 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937950782317 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784163589981 0.056905535591 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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