Undoubtedly, advancement in medical science has been proved as a boon for accelerating the life expectancy of people. Owing to this, the burgeoning rates of the senior citizens' population can be observed in most nations. II consider this trend constructive one due to its enormous benefits comprising responsible citizens, prosperous livelihood and assistance to youngsters.
Commencing with the most salient reason why it is beneficial for society to have elders, they play a vital role in making a society a better place to live. Since most parents have hectic life schedules, there is no impartment of moral values in young ones unless there are grandparents with them Grandparents eighteen them with every aspect of life whether by setting examples in front of them or verbally describing things. Consequently, it renders society I with not only responsible citizens in the future but also makes them more sensitive towards others. Moreover, attainment of happiness is another positive aspect of having elders in the home. Instead of living life idly, elders tend to involve in minor household works and share responsibilities too, which bestow adults with a relieved and pleasant life.
Another worth considering merit is the wisdom handed down to the youngsters by the elderly. As older people have a plethora of real-life experiences, it often renders solace in seeking advice from older people. For example, retired citizens can adequately guide society's youngsters by sharing their experiences, such as how to overcome the crisis of poverty and what kind of initiatives one should take while setting up goals. Youngsters can also get benefit from the preceding mistakes done by elders. This awareness can be conveyed either by using social networking sites or by forming groups with neighbours. Hence, society can gain a myriad of benefits from older minds.
To conclude, positive aspects of society, including conducive environment of society, pleasure and constant guidance, can be ensured provided that more older citizens are in the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 965.302439024 182% => OK
No of words: 323.0 196.424390244 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4520123839 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90619905797 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 106.607317073 193% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637770897833 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 283.868780488 195% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.766919894 43.030603864 362% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.666666667 112.824112599 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8888888889 22.9334400587 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 5.23603664747 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150831765858 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629994362125 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407779804095 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855805744904 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153117915576 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.2329268293 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 61.2550243902 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.09 8.06136585366 138% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 40.7170731707 287% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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