It is thought by some that it's better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that life will be better if you live on the outskirts while I believe that life would be better in the city.
The option of living in the countryside does have a lot of reasons to be considered that is a good choice. Living in the rural regions will be beneficial for people’ health. People are able to provide fresh and high quality air which can avoid many health related problems such as asthma, obesity or stroke. Besides that, few sanitary and water problems may provide an adequate source of water used for living and daily activities. In terms of stress, people living in the rural areas tend to have fewer stress related issues which can lead to several mental diseases like depression. This may be one of the reasons why people should choose to live on the outskirts to eliminate high pressure.
On the other hand, I believe that it would be more beneficial when people live in the urban regions. Firstly, families with children will have access to better educational facilities and medical services. This can ensure that young children are able to receive a well-educated condition and high quality of living to become a decent citizen. Secondly, the job market is increasingly competitive so that living in a large cosmopolis may offer more job opportunities. As a result, people may not struggle in the unemployed situation and have a successful career which allows them to afford their house and life independently.
For all the aforementioned reasons, I firmly hold the view that there would be more advantages for a person when living in the urban areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 245, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...sh and high quality air which can avoid many health related problems such as asthma, obesit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84558823529 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66016973663 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547794117647 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.0797434174 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.384615385 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168905086477 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636392210434 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729656818471 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131850077857 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983701670745 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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