“It is recommended that education should be free for all Vietnamese children until they finish high school.”
Do you agree or disagree with this idea? Give reasons and examples from your reading, experiences, or observation to support your point of view.
it is suggested that all Vietnamese students should get free education until they complete the high school syllabus. While I agree that free learning service is a beneficial chance for all children to raise the quality of life, I believe that there remain some drawbacks related to this problem.
On the one hand, I agree that a free-of-charge education brings such an intense betterment for our society. it is better for kids who come from poor families and be impossible for attending school because free tuition fee can help them to have opportunities to get out of poverty. For example, through the chargeless education system, more students would be encouraged to go to school and step out of their comfort zone. In addition, due to this effective policy, many developed countries like the USA have increased their overall GDP after carrying on it.
On the other hand, I believed that this issue also attains the weak points. it can easily cause an effect on the whole society and living standards there because both learners and adults would not understand the value of education anymore. For instance, many schools might not be able to improve the facilities and study environment because of lacking money. In the United states, the cost of public education is often up to the state so the money would come from low-income families.
To encapsulate, getting a free education for Vietnamese students has both advantages and disadvantages. Personally, I think that we should equal the management of tuition fees to suit the student's condition as well as the need of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as well as, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99621212121 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72809068121 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7589358094 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.916666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235644571225 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862277711925 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673289365945 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146161539839 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734042594086 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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