The bar chart illustrates the carbon emissions in several nations within three neumerous years.
Overall,U.S.A experienced a upward trend. while Germany, United Kingdom and china shows the fluctuation throughout the years. Although china initally had increased rate, it decresed end of the period in Canada and India.
U.S.A carbon emissions thousand metric tonnes about 1200,000 in 1975. Being higher the years of 1990 and 2005 rate by approximately 4 % . Then it dropped towards 14% in Germany between 1975 to 1990. It had slightly decline around 1 % in 2005.
However, the figure showed the lower proportion of thousand metric tonnes in British varied and hitting the low point above 2 % in 1990 to 2005.
Percentage of carbon emissions by different countries. China rate was less then 2005. The proportion of Canada dramatically lower in 1975 and differed throughout the duration.
Meanwhile, the figure experienced a stedy growth during the two years rose to approximately 4% india in 1990 then increased by around 5% and remained swiftly for over the period of 2005.
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- The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: declined
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35087719298 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79197684336 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7946515646 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3846153846 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1538461538 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134345306104 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513656001331 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651729111731 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732202924202 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053103558081 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.86 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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