The Two diagrams explain the development that took place in lakeside town between the years 2000 and 2009.
Overall, it is found that Lakeside underwent major changes such as expansion of Industrial complex. Decline in woodland area, Establishment of University and Development of shopping mall area.
Derelict ware houses present between Residential area and Wood lands are replaced by car parking area. Nextly, Woodland area shrunk in its size by almost half. Old town area present behind the ware houses is changed to office and university area. In addition, the lake present in the center of the woodlands is modified into a pond extended towards university. Moreover, Art center evolved into Multi screen theatre. In the similar manner, the residential area present besides school and art center is modified into a Shopping center. Along with this, Industrial complex present besides woodland and residential area largely replaced woodland. However, Residential area in Northwest part, link between pond and river along with school remained unchanged through out the process.
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- The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people fro using their cars 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50299401198 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60286941346 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3209727197 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5454545455 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0329178559645 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0163456194993 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026760274953 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0383374899491 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019113900735 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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