Globalization led to the the development of various choices in almost all ways.. I strongly say that these days we have got options regards everything whether it is a good or bad situation or thing.
Firstly, Considering food for kids and new born previously there are no varieties of food for them. Only thing is that the food is prepared at home. But in the current scenario, Large amount of varieties are available in the recent days in supermarkets and commercial stalls. Along with this even for adults, Most of the time our parent generations used to give importance to home food and also lesser varieties of foods are available during there generation. However, In recent decades large range of cuisines are available for adults also. For example After the development of migration through out the world the chinese food is now available in almost all the other nations.
On the other hand, There are also choices in all other aspects like clothing, all day to day products like watches, jewellery, groceries ,. education, jobs. In addition. previously during the marriages the parents used to select the bridge or bridegroom for their children and based on their ideas children will marry the person told by parents. Now a days children themselves are selecting their companions through various websites like Jeevan saathi, Community matrimony soon giving least importance to their parents views as their as giving values to their children views. Nevertheless, there are also mis-understandings that are developed between the people because of the same globalisation culture as all individuals not accept it while some parents think that there children are not matured enough to take their own decisions.
To conclude,. It can be emphasized that the count of choices increased in almost all aspects in the life. Choices may range from food to the better half. This is actually a good trend of development if not misused.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16938110749 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7771471661 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9809497887 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0601777180128 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0207836489305 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260015971591 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528563297703 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348053603543 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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