There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention to problems with irregular bus service that I have been experiencing for over a fortnight.
Let me explain to you the problems that people confront and limited bus service is one of them. Adding fuel to the fire is its schedule and as such buses, do not run on time. On the weekends, the situation is quite different as there are no buses available on my home route from the office.
Though I have my own vehicle, due to the rising of conventional fuels, it becomes impossible for me to travel by my own vehicle due to the expensive traveling cost. Apart from this, reaching late at my workplace has become a part of my routine due to the lesser amount of bus service from my house to downtown. I suffer both financially and mentally, I am able to get only half of my wages because of deduction on my salary due to reaching late. As a result, I could manage my weekly expenses.
I would be grateful if you could make the bus service frequent on the above-mentioned route. It would be convenient for the people to move easily to any place and working people like me would suffer mentally and financially. I hope you will look into this matter and take expedited action to resolve the case.
Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...venience. Yours sincerely, Shwatank
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64609053498 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6594234302 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1070186495 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8461538462 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209449765195 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780940513589 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959501217147 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139125442889 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124581116333 0.0580467560999 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.