The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian ciies.
He given chart illustrates the outcomes of a survey about habits of citizens in purchasing and consuming coffee and tea in 5 Australian metropolitans.
Overall, most people in almost cities decided to go to café while people in Adelaide prefered purchasing instant coffee most. Residents bought fresh coffee take up for least percentage in all cities.
People went to café in Melbourne and Hobart has a fairly equal proportion, which is the highest ratio at 64% . While that figure in Sydney is slightly lower at 62%, followed by the consumption of fresh coffee in Brisbane which is at over 55%. Adelaide shows the gap of 1% between purchasing instant coffee and fresh coffee inclined to instant coffee.
Residents who consumed instant coffee in Hobart take up for nearly 55%, highest in 5 cities. That figure in Brisbane is at 53%, followed by 48% in Melbourne and then 46% in Sydney. People consuming instant coffee in Adelaide account for 49,9%, highest proportion in this city. There was a similar pattern of purchasing fresh coffee between the figure in Brisbane and Adelaide, reaching at 36%, lowest in 5 cities. In contrast, 44% of Sydney people bought fresh coffee, followed by 43% in Melbourne and 38% in Hobart.
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- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian ciies 61
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: gave
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99024390244 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.636476546 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3484797124 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177140304032 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743372380515 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797259218561 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143213108675 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951614906293 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.