Rivers, lakes, and seas play an integral part in providing humans with clean water, which helps us to maintain our necessary activities and ensure our lives. However, our water environment has been seriously polluted, which has become a major concern for us. This essay will outline some causes of this phenomenon and its effects on animal life and human society.
There are many main reasons causing water pollution, which mostly comes from human actions. To begin with, these days, because of the development of industrialization and modernization, many factories and industries have been built to satisfy our needs. These factories and industries have discharged mostly untreated waste or sewage into rivers and oceans. This has made a significant contribution to polluting the water environment and destroying water creatures. Moreover, the development of tourism also brings about contaminating the water. For example, when traveling on a cruise or a boat, some unconscious visitors choose to throw the trashs into lakes or rivers instead of putting them into the garbage or bins. As a result, a large number of contaminants will pollute clean water and destroy the water ecosystem.
Water pollution has a severe impact on animal life and human society. Firstly, water pollution affects animal life, especially sea animals. Because of long-term water pollution, many rare sea creatures such as whales, dolphins, turtles, etc die out and even can be extinct. Secondly, polluted water not only accounts for lacking clean water but also affects land used in farming and breed. For instance, when water resources are polluted and have been wasted such as oil spills or chemicals, we can not use this source of toxic water to irrigate vegetables, trees, and feed animals in agriculture. As a consequence, this has led to a serious impact on farmers' incomes and the state's economy in the agriculture
In conclusion, there are some main causes such as disposal of untreated water from factories and unconscious travelers. This tendency has also resulted in some significant effects on animal habitats and human lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29376854599 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79169353943 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554896142433 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9284082581 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.941176471 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330650039553 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117948821483 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706632004541 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195603473535 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497783544582 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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