The table data below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010.
The given illustration represents the middle band points in the participants the IELTS General Test by people of various language group in 2010. Im general, the table decribes scores for all section together with the overall mark.
As it can be seen, the total medium band grade of German group is the highest and occupied 6.7 points. In addition, this group possessed the top band score almost in all section, with only one exception in reading part, where they step back to the Malay group. The table data clearly shows that French language candidates are at the second place with overall band - 6.5. Especially they depicted significantly higher results in Writing part in comparison with Indonesian and Malay groups, covering 6.5 point. Returning to the details, after French groups with overall 6.3 bands was Indonesian speaking groups, their the highest point in exam was at the Speaking part and maintained 6.7. Likewise, Malay group candidates represented the lowest scores with overall band 6.4, and this is the highest indicator than in other participants group in Reading section.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17085427136 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4514026597 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587939698492 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4208969438 43.030603864 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.0 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441974036572 0.215688989381 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255686056276 0.103423049105 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.289227201863 0.0843802449381 343% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.480475955265 0.15604864568 308% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.33762934689 0.0819641961636 412% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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