The bar graph provides information about number of boys and girls playing sport in 6 different cities in English town in the year 2012.
Overall, From the graph, In the year 2012 ,it is clear that boys showed greater interest in playing sports in A,B,C,D cities when compared to girls. However, in E,F cities in English town, number of girls more interested in sports. Maximum number of boys in C city are enthusiastic about sports and In contrast, Lowest number of boys showed up interest for playing cricket in D city. In the same way, most of the girls contributed towards sports activity in D city, whereas least significant number of girls playing sports in E city.
Half of the boys in A city are involved in sports, whereas only 30% of Boys in B city participated in sports. In comparison to B City, More number of boys showed up interest is 8% approximately higher in c city. Continued to increase in percentages steadily in next D,E cities are at 40% and 60% respectively.
Around 38% of girls made up their interest in A city to involve in sports activities and in B city girls percentage is at 40%.In contrast, only 20% of girls are made up their mind towards sports. Compared to all cities, Most of the girls showed interest in D city which is half of entire city in English town and continued to decline in cities D,E were are 20% and 10% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... greater interest in playing sports in A,B,C,D cities when compared to girls. Howe...
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...ater interest in playing sports in A,B,C,D cities when compared to girls. However,...
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...es when compared to girls. However, in E,F cities in English town, number of girls...
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...nthusiastic about sports and In contrast, Lowest number of boys showed up interest for p...
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...crease in percentages steadily in next D,E cities are at 40% and 60% respectively....
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...own and continued to decline in cities D,E were are 20% and 10% respectively.
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... and continued to decline in cities D,E were are 20% and 10% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, whereas, in contrast, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 33.7804878049 175% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60569105691 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62499980328 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430894308943 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9250608907 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.3 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42142214679 0.215688989381 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20640687329 0.103423049105 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140172142969 0.0843802449381 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3253352824 0.15604864568 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186256747522 0.0819641961636 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.