In this modern era, the majority of people move to urban areas because of the lack of facilities, employment, and education. While some people argue that the disadvantages of this statement outweigh the merits, I believe that this development is beneficial in many ways.
Firstly, it goes without saying that there are a lot of reasons why young people migrate to cities for work or study. First of all, cities with prominent colleges and advanced educational environments are the best option for well-rounded knowledge and soft skills, which will
enable youngsters to compete for vacancies in big companies. On the one hand, after finishing tertiary school in homeland, young people will pursue the next level of education in the city for a brighter career. Hence, cities offer better job opportunities for youngsters to enhance their abilities, acquire a competitive spirit, and higher income because big enterprises are always located in mega cities. Moreover, many people want to become more mature by living far from their parents.
On the other hand, it is no exaggeration to say that besides benefits about career, income, young people’s immigration to urban areas pose certain disadvantages. In densely populated cities, living expenses and accommodation leasing cost high, making pressure for young people from the countryside and they need to work more to settle down their life. Furthermore, the big gap between urban and rural life puts pressure on young people to be odd. Many giddy people do anything to be like their contemporaries in cities, which leads to overindulgence by temptation or social sins such as drug trafficking, harlotry, and adultery... Another reason is rural areas lack the labor force to develop their economy further behind cities.
In conclusion, although many people are keen to leave rural areas, and move to the industrial cities, these trends can be exhausting. However, personally, I believe that towns offer many more opportunities than villages. In this regard, it is a reasonable way to move to the cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29483282675 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8652507348 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.453077148 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.133333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316449619051 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102229088621 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542385375272 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158554715503 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550850306007 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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