The information about how often people in the United States Of America ate junk food in restaurants from 2003 to 2013 is depicted by the rendered bar chart. The data has been calibrated in the percentage of people.
To begin with, 4% of people in the USA were going to restaurants for junk food every day in 2003. However, the percentage of the population who were eating junk food in hotels was around 18% in 2003. 31% and 30% of people who ate junk food in hotels, one time in a week and one or two times in a month respectively in 2003. There had been a drastic decrease seen in the number of people who ate junk food a few times a year in 2003, it accounted for nearly 14%. Although, only 5% population were never eating fast food at restaurants in 2003.
Moving towards, the same number of people who ate fast food daily in hotels in 2006 and 2013, it was around 3%. Moreover, this trend was same for people who were eating junk food in restaurants a few times a year and never went to the restaurant for junk food, it accounted for 15% and 4% correspondingly, in 2006 and 2013. There was a similar decrease was noticed in the percentage of people who were going to eat junk food in hotels several times a week and one time in a week, it was 6%, from 2006 to 2013. Those people who were eating junk food in restaurants once or twice a month in the year 2006 and 2013, it comprised to 25% and 34% respectively.
To sum up, it can be vividly manifested that there were fewer people who ate junk food daily and who never ate junk food throughout the span.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 297.0 196.424390244 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27609427609 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39914524868 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40404040404 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6062061343 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.833333333 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307759354225 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152815214328 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802484889377 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222971667257 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552754623764 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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