The given horizontal graph elucidates the total number of trips of males and females and what are motive of their trips in a European nation in 2007.
Overall, the highest number of men were travelling and their purpose of travelling was work. While, women has least interest in travelling.
It is crystal clear that, approximately 25 trips done by females as a day trip which was low as compared to males. However, in sports and entertainment trips women had merely 125 trips whereas, men had higher trips than females that was near about 10 trips. On the contrary, number of trips of females were increased in visiting friends and shopping it.was accounted around 200 trips for visiting friends and almost 275 trips for shopping respectively.
Moving Further, in the case of men trips at visiting friends and shopping was similar. A dramatic decline was seen in the number of women trips in the term of work, it was accounted 21 trips.There was a slight upsurged was observed in the number of males trips for work and accounted around 375 trips.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d their purpose of travelling was work. While, women has least interest in travelling...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the least'.
Suggestion: has the least
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Suggestion:
...y. Moving Further, in the case of men trips at visiting friends and shopping ...
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Suggestion:
...r, in the case of men trips at visiting friends and shopping was similar. A dram...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...term of work, it was accounted 21 trips.There was a slight upsurged was observed in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87222222222 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55842230512 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538888888889 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6508250173 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.625 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241793600826 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116386913186 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412859363366 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162741432768 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248244163573 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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