Nowadays a few people take their family with them abroad whenever they go on a business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages for them and for their family?
In thesedays, people offentely take their families with them to foreign nations while they visit there to attend official meetings. This scenario has Pros and Cons both. The ensuing paragraphs will enunciate what are the reasons behind the both of these aspects.
Firstly, when it comes to the merits of travelling with household people the prominent one is growth of mutual understanding among each other. This is considered to observe the thinking process of other person, it is necessary to spend time with him. By investing time on each one during exploring world will definitely not only cook up the situations of exchanging thoughts within, but also avert pessimistic vibes which indirectly stimulates a personality to work harder. Consequently, understanding in members and productivity in profession arise. Additionally, asking questions to elders by exposing different society comprised of cultures with various peoples decrease the generation gap. For instance, a recent survey of Cambridge University shows 30% of families are much happier because they tend to visit trips with lead person who is participating in meetings.
Foremost Demerit, however, of this view is desruption in businesses. Managing time for dear one's in a day despite of long conferences could lack determination towards work and these intruptes the overall development of carrer. Top of it, there is denying fact that tripping which is full of enjoyment will be possible if every member is available and having precious moments with each other. Though, sometimes related people to the main individual has to wait for much period in specific rooms or resorts because he has been to the other gatherings. This may lead disputes in social environment of houses. For example, last year I went to Singapore with my father on invitation of his company but I had to wait for a half day in a restaurant where we were stayed and my whole planning was wasted of gaining knowledge of several destinations of that state.
To conclude, although this trend has many advantages, but its disadvantages cannot be ignored as organization of time for beloved people on business trips almost impossible at larger extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...development of carrer. Top of it, there is denying fact that tripping which is full of enj...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24786324786 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90739030776 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655270655271 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9867643842 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.125 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246598778902 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621658024335 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775726425649 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144602417373 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455553093649 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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