Dear ABC,
I hope you are keeping up in good health and spirits. I need your help in a great and noble cause. I want some financial favor for a charity work that I will explain ahead and hoping that you will consider to be a part of it.
Recently, I came across a Blind people's charity named "The Light" which provides monetary assistance to cure this particular problem if possible by medical science and even financial aid in the sense if they want to get further education for a better life. As, this may give them a confidence of getting them stand up on their own two feet.
Although, it's a great cause but still it needs a lot to survive and that's when I also decided to volunteer for this. So, I request you and belief that some donation might make this effort less troublesome. it will be a little from your side but a big thing for them. I assure you that the donation made by you will go in the right hands.
Any kind of monetary platform be used for donation be it online or offline. For online payment, either pay through e-wallet, debit/credit card. Offline this can be done by check or demand draft in their account and further information just check their website. I will provide the link through sms.
Please consider this an honest request and try to do your bit if possible.
Thanking you,
Yours lovingly,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...et further education for a better life. As, this may give them a confidence of get...
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Line 4, column 11, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nd up on their own two feet. Although, its a great cause but still it needs a lot ...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...but still it needs a lot to survive and thats when I also decided to volunteer for th...
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Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ight make this effort less troublesome. it will be a little from your side but a b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50204081633 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39750668766 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5649460124 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5333333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180639541546 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603672006523 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462813643698 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956553428367 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498452846733 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.