WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The figure below is a town planning map. Showing the likely position of new shopping centers as well as the various different zones and major transportation
route of the town.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words
Given is the picture of an unnamed town indicating the scheduled location of new shopping centers as well as various zones and the area's primary transportation system.
It is apparent from the information supplied that there are three arterial roads leading to the countryside to the northwest, northeast and southeast of the town. Located at the intersection of these routes is a relatively small central business district where automobiles are not permitted. Surrounding this place, meanwhile, is a considerably bigger residential area where two separating industrial zones are situated as well. Also noteworthy is that a railway line runs through the entire town.
As regards the planned position of the two new shopping malls, one is predicted to be erected inside the central business district, accessible only by train or by parking on the edge of the region and walking. One further plaza is likely to be constructed on the outskirts of the town. Access to this place will be by either train or other modes of transport since it will be located between the railway line and the northwest avenue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... industrial zones are situated as well. Also noteworthy is that a railway line runs ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while, as regards, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10497237569 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87084497358 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618784530387 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0395773708 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197866940172 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812097875352 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582994240623 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143733641189 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564293477339 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.