The line graph shows the number of bananas imported to 4 countries from 1996 to 2004

The line graph provides information about the bananas cost in the US dollar per KG in 4 different countries(Japan, France, Germany and the USA) between 1996 and 2004.

Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the banana price in US dollars per KG in Japan was very high. While the USA maintained banana cost remained steady. Banana prices fluctuated in Japan, France and Germany countries throughout the period.

At the beginning of the period, the banana price was at $2 per kg in both Japan and France countries. However, the cost in Japan increased drastically to $3 in 1998. Whereas, selling cost of banana remained study till 1998 in France and declined to 1.5 dollars in 1999 and after that, the banana price fluctuated in both countries. 2.5 and 2 dollars were banana prices respectively, at the end of the period.

The banana rate in Germany was high compared to the USA in 1996 and figures for price at 1.5 and 1 dollar correspondingly. After that banana price was in ups and downs till 1999 and then significantly increased to $2 in 2002, ended up at about $1.75 price. On the other hand, apart from slight growth in 1998 of price approximately $0.25, In comparison with previous year price of $1, it remained steady over 8 years.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e cost in Japan increased drastically to in 1998. Whereas, selling cost of banana...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, whereas, while, apart from, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8287037037 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73276940605 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50462962963 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6830733692 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8181818182 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172650936735 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763681334591 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568830027627 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130907365928 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617534948077 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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