Even though governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the health- care symtem, the overall standard of physical health in developed countries is decreasing. What are the protential reasons for this, and what are some of the long-term effects?
These days, the number of people, who run a higher risk of contracting health problems, such as cardiovascular disease, is constantly increasing in developed nations. It is undeniable that the foremost reasons of poor health are an unhealthy diet and stress. Meanwhile, this problem will cause harmful effects to future generations and a higher cost of living.
To commence with, the most prominent reason for rising the issue of poor health is an unhealthy diet. For instance, by eating irregularly, consuming large portions of high-calorie food, about 50% of the adult population in Europe with so-called disordered eating suffer from obesity. Moreover, stress is also the main cause of poor health. Due to a difficult work-life balance, such as the fast-paced corporate culture and competitive work atmospheres, people, in modern times, have little to no time for eating healthy or taking care of oneself.
The deficiency standard of physical health might trigger unfavorable effects to the society. First of all, if generations continue to partake in these unhealthy habits, they will continue on for generations to come. As a case in point, parents who have health-related diseases, such as obesity, cardiovascular disease and diabetes, have a higher chance of passing these conditions on to their children, and so on. Consequently, these health problems will lead to a higher cost of living. Due to increased demands for services, it is only natural that the healthcare industry would charge pieces to its clients, resulting in higher costs.
To summarize, poor health is a big problem that affects to many developed countries nowadays. It has both unhealthy diet and stress causes. If not properly taken care of, these problems could cause harmful long-term effects to future generations in terms of diseases and a higher cost of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29591836735 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91798675031 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2059616984 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216744675844 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746290751301 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442366545822 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134913314458 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110008481978 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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