1. Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns.
You should include:
• Where you live
• The problem
• What he should do
Dear Steve,
I am currently staying at Room 42 of Clinton Building. This letter is in regards to the noise coming from the adjacent flat which you own.
As you know, I am a student and have been staying in your flat for the past year and have had no problem. But in the past few weeks, the new tenants in the other flat have been creating a ruckus. They would host parties every other day, bring in loads of people. They clearly have no idea about the time of the day be it day or night, they continue their activity. Like me, the other elderly tenants are also facing the same trouble.
If I could suggest you few points viz. restricting the number and timing for outsiders, limiting noise level, no party on weekdays and after 12 etc.
I request you to please look into the matter and take appropriate steps
Yours Sincerley,
Melinda Jobs
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... 42 of Clinton Building. This letter is in regards to the noise coming from the adjacent flat...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'points'' or 'point's'?
Suggestion: points'; point's
...me trouble. If I could suggest you few points viz. restricting the number and timing ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4358974359 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15415138252 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685897435897 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.7138204837 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.2 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160603911164 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622517441962 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752722470696 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962104767123 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475896966409 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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