You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antiques shop.
In your letter
• explain how you found the shop
• describe the item that you would like to sell
• say how much you would like to sell the item for
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I wish to sell an antique Colt 45 Revolver that I acquired during a Garage Sale, last week.
I would start off by saying that I am an avid antique collector. The gun was apparised from Gerhard valuers- which are not only recognized but also a leading valuers in the market. The revolver is a 1943 Colt 45. It is in good condition apart from the usual wear-tear. As per their conidtion rating, it is a solid 6 and in working condition.
At one of the auction the same gun, but in mint condition, was sold off for USD 5,400. Based on the current condition of the gun and market I am willing go for USD 3,000. I will be travelling to Las Vegas, Nevada next month. You can call your appraiser at that time and then we can negotiate the deal.
I am looking forward to this deal so that we can establish good business relation
Yours sincerely,
Rick Astley
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'valuer'?
Suggestion: valuer
... not only recognized but also a leading valuers in the market. The revolver is a 1943 C...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31176470588 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39614020651 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676470588235 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0781221898 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6363636364 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123540681035 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039529868314 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064389766276 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742268419354 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705428476063 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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