Two tables presents changes tempertures and hours of daylight between Mumbai ( India) and Moscow (Russia) in May 2007
Overall, it can be seen from the tables that tempertures of Mumbai is hotter than temperatures of Moscow. There is a large temperature difference.The highest temperature in Mumbai is 34 poison on the Saturday and the the lowest temperature is 29 poison on all three days.However, the highest temperatures of Moscow just 17 poison on the Sunday and the lowest temperature also just 2 poison. In general, the temperature in Russia is cooler than India.
On the other hand, Sunrise start time in Mumbai is fixed at 6.00, but sunrise start time in Moscow is changes on three days respectively 4.52,4.51 and 4.50. It is sooner than almost 2 hours earlier.But the sunset start time in Mumbai is fluctuating between 19.11 and 19.12 and as opposite as the sunset start time later. It start at intervals 22.02, 22.04 and 22.05. In short, there is a significant difference between the temperature and the starting time of sunrise and sunset.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, in general, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85161618666 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488636363636 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0964278458 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.571428571 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147123981769 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650594295895 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744157700617 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139413684616 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103481671757 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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