The three pie charts below show the coffee production and consumption around the world, and also the profit distribution. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The pie charts give the information about the percentage of coffee manufactured, used and the profit allocated from different sources of coffee.
Overall, it can be seen from the charts that the proportion of European people consuming coffee is the highest, as compared to that of Japanese is the lowest. The amount of coffee produced the most is in South Africa and the least in Viet Nam. The main profit source of coffee results from delivery.
As mentioned above, the percentage of coffee used in Europe is the highest, accounting for 41%. The proportion of American consuming coffee is higher than that of other countries, with 39% for the former and 12% for the later. Besides, the figure for Japan is the lowest with 8%.
On the other hand, the percentage of coffee made in South Africa takes the first position among countries producing coffee, taking up nearly a half. By contrast, Viet Nam is the country that accounts for the lowest percentage of producing coffee with 16%. Moreover, the delivery accounts for above a half for distributing the profit from coffee, with the highest percentage in the chart. In comparison with the proportion of profit distribution from exporters is the least one with only 10%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 392, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...the highest percentage in the chart. In comparison with the proportion of profit distribut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97572815534 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60623558906 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5076348002 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1818181818 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125205609307 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591670473297 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471233037587 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096066167415 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463203279232 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.