The table below illustrate the rate of commuters who utilize three chief airports of England from year 1998 to year 2003
Overall, It can evident that, use of plane as ride was increased gradully for Gatwik and Stansted airports throughout the period. meanwhile Heathrow airport faced dramatical flctuation during the given years.
Explicity, at the beginning duration number of passanger at Gatwick and Stansted airport was 36.5 millions and 17.3 millions for 1998 which was rised by almost 5 millions and 9 millions for next year respectively. In addition, for year 2000, utilization of Stansted airport was almost 12 times higer then Gatwick airport. The sequence of increase was only seen at of Gatwick airport in after years, accountant of 47.3 millions millions for year 2001, 51.5 millions for year 2002 and nearly twice at the end. at other side, number of Stansted traveller remain constant till ending.
nontheless, for year 1998,Heathrow airport users rate was 27.2 and inclined by 36.4 for year 1999. futhermore, highest number of commuters of all time were recored for year 2000,comprised to 48.2 millions, than, a dramatic drcreased was observed for following year, which was diclined about 9 millions for 2001 and almost 15 millions for 2002. at contrast almost 20 millions rise was seen at the ending time compare to starting period.
- Some people agrue that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others belive that it is better to try and improve such situation Discuss both views and give your own opinion 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17808219178 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63453304611 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579908675799 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.56781183 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865024219139 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050016357271 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442776318377 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809714828575 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536900528572 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.