Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about where to settle as a family. Some think that living in city the right choice because of advantages, however I partly agree with this statement.
One the one hand, living in urban areas not always about facilities and amenities, there also negative side behind this privilege. The number one issue in urban centers is the air pollution caused by motorized vehicles. Hence, in megacities high percentage of harmful gases in the atmosphere like hydrofluorocarbons, perfluorocarbons, chlorofluorocarbons, sulfur hexafluoride that can cause various diseases like asthma, lung cancer, emphysema and so on. For example, in 2019,the number of deaths due to air pollution in Japan was estimated at 42,6 thousand. Moreover, traffic jams another drawback of urban life. In addition to the time lost in a traffic jam, the physical wear is noted by the noise and emissions of the cars. As an example, I can mention that, American commuter wastes 54 hours a year in traffic delays.
On the flip side, an amazing perk of living in the city is the amount of education and career. Megacities are rich in factories and the top-rated Multi-national companies like Tesla, SpaceX, Amazon have established their headquarters in these regions. As a result, city-dwellers can gain good employment and can earn high wages compared to the rural areas. For instance, the article published by The Economist newspaper on job requirements in the cities, the majority of adolescents going for the jobs and good lifestyle. Besides, there are enormous education opportunities. Due to the fact, that there are a lot of universities and study centers in cities, students have lifelong learning to become well-rounded individuals. Thus, these opportunities make families migrate to the urban field.
In conclusion, living in city districts has both benefits and drawbacks. Therefore city-resident, should choose to live in a place that is the most comfortable with their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...tricts has both benefits and drawbacks. Therefore city-resident, should choose to live in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30573248408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16597032329 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614649681529 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4862303568 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115446238848 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356015894386 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523745144421 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887433206399 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632729698177 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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