some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is currently a contentious argument over whether the government's abolishment of tuition fee regardless of students' socio-economic background is necessary. I totally disagree with this opinion as both students and society might be adversely affected.
It's not rare for people to argue that college tuition waivers are an appropriate policy. They support their point by stating that financially disadvantaged students will stand a better chance to get a job. However, when the number of university degree increases, the job market will become even more competitive. Unfortunately, the soaring of youth unemployment, which is always hard to tackle, will therefore become inevitable.
Furthermore, the provision of free-of-charge education will somehow have an adverse bearing on higher education pursuers. If the monetary burden is removed, the undergraduates may have an incline to take their study for granted. Tuition fee has long acted like a mean to encourage the determination on getting a good grade. Once that pressure disappears, students' willingness to achieve a better academic performance may fade correspondingly.
In conclusion, if the free-college policy is actually implemented, I believe that it will bring about many problems.
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- some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...a contentious argument over whether the governments abolishment of tuition fee regardless o...
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Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d a better chance to get a job. However, when the number of university degree inc...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that it will bring about many problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73655913978 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36133314731 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725806451613 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.4543215392 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161595346723 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520846862112 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361780866648 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834536548768 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229848769064 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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