Some disavantages of zoos
Nowadays, building of zoos have many benefits such as animal preservations, especially providing job opportunities and promoting local economic. In the other hand, some disadvantages of the zoos we can't deny that a lot of nagative face impact on animals.These are some disadvantages influent directly to animals. Zoos just are artificial enviroment so their enviroment are not same to natural ones. One thing you can see clearly that animals are kept in cages, they lost their instinct while they can run around comfortablely or hunt preys and especially animals lose freedom. In stead of that, In the artifical enviroments animals just are feeded by humans that why they rely on humans. Most people suppose zoos is really unethical, we can't get reasons for preservation or education to capture animals into cages, we have no right to use animals for entertainment and profit purposes. Consummary, If we actually want to protect animals from endangering or extince, we should do another way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, really, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01413337462 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8455865168 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143987789976 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653007939195 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752578046292 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143987789976 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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