The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it.
The given two pictures compare the layout of a town named Hunderstone as it is now with a proposed scheme for development.
Overall, one of the most striking changes to the area is that whereas the eastern side will almost remain unchanged, the western one will undergo several significant changes, especially with regards to the transport infrastructure.
As regards the first map, Hunderstone is currently divided into two main areas by the railway which crosses the entire town from north to south. To the west of the railway, there is an air field that is connected with the arterial road (A2). A roundabout in the middle of this road connects the A2 road with the east of the town, in particular the build-up area surrounding the town center. Furthermore, a gas station is located next to the connecting road intersection with the railway.
In the future, however, the plan involves the erection of an industrial estate on the original site of the air field. A new railway line will also be built to provide further access to this area. One another development is that a larger roundabout will be constructed in proximity to the current gas station. Finally, a new road (A4) which links the A2 road with the central area is also planned to be built in the south of the town.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, as regards, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73542600897 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72017360602 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551569506726 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5784425527 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129806349162 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537323332188 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665868431719 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895025594139 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749587843194 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.