Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities

One of the most important characteristics of mankind is its social living. According to the statement young people, today do not give enough time to help their communities. I agree with this statement by stating the following examples in my real life and also by considering the few facts below.

Nowadays with the increase in Technology and rapid access to the internet young people prefer to spend more time in front of the computer than doing any physical tasks. For example, there are many opportunities and games available in the market which lure young people's minds, Recently many young people spend lots of hours time in a day with a game called PUBG which is turning out to be dangerous day by day. There are many suicides happening across the world due to this game.

As the competition between young people is too high nowadays they are focusing more on their career, which will be an important part of their life. As nowadays parents want their children to perform well in extracurricular activities. Due to these reasons, they might not contribute to helping their communities.

Moreover, young people nowadays might not have awareness or knowledge of the old days' tasks in which they are not showing interest to step out and help others in the society. Parents of the present generation also don’t want their children to participate in such activities because of mainly 2 reasons they don’t want their children to get strained by doing these tasks which will not be of any use to their career. Second, they are more concerned about their safety and security while allowing children to these tasks.

By the above points, I believe Nowadays young people do not give enough time to help their communities.

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Average: 7 (2 votes)
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Independent TOEFL Writing

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ill be an important part of their life. As nowadays parents want their children to...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93493150685 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59266932481 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527397260274 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7174304275 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448135451879 0.236089414692 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173566124281 0.076458572812 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185918195944 0.0737576698707 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30728989936 0.150856017488 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17862698268 0.0645574589148 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ill be an important part of their life. As nowadays parents want their children to...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93493150685 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59266932481 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527397260274 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7174304275 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448135451879 0.236089414692 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173566124281 0.076458572812 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185918195944 0.0737576698707 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30728989936 0.150856017488 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17862698268 0.0645574589148 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.