Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Unarguably, environmental deterioration is happening at a startling pace. Many individuals warn that the vanishing of various species is a major hurdle for humans, however, it is argued by others that mankind is facing more pressing issues. This essay is to elaborate on both viewpoints and express my own perspective.
To begin with, there is no denying that human’s activities are taking their toll on different species in nature. Worldwide, myriads of animals are losing their habitats due to overexploitation or under severe threat caused by hunting, thus being pushed to the brink of extinction. A telling example is the elephants, who used to abound on the Earth, are now at serious stake as hunters continuously massacred them for their ivory. On top of that, the scarcity of plants is well-documented, since deforestation illegal logging and forest fire continue to pose a threat to forests and jungles that accommodate not only animals but millions of types of trees. The results of this depletion are manifold, including the loss of ecological biodiversity as well as important species that contribute to science and medicine.
Nevertheless, apart from this extinction issue, other environmental problems are all on the rise. First of all, major factors jeopardising humankind are global warming and ocean acidification, which are resulted from greenhouse gas emissions from industries. Not to mention, pollution is accelerating in cities, constituting a huge health hazard. To lesser or larger extent, these environmental dangers have detracted from people’s quality of life and render government around the world anxious. Furthermore, it is apparent that natural calamities such as tsunamis, tornadoes or hurricanes, which will deal s lethal blow to areas or countries as occurring, are even worth worrying more about.
In conclusion, I believe that apart from the degradation of the Earth’s flora and fauna, there multiple grave problems related to the environment that need dealing with. Therefore, it is high time natural conservation and environmental protection were prioritized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, therefore, thus, well, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54489164087 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19187689285 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66253869969 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3936932458 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0666666667 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181540634191 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514403906552 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419843314578 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962549547413 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197045347767 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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