The line graph and the table show a monthly average temperature and precipitation of a particular area in the world

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The line graph and the table show a monthly-average temperature and precipitation of a particular area in the world.

The line graph and the column graph show average temperature monthly basis and the amount of rain of a particular area in worldwide range.

Regarding to the temperature, it seems like to witness a fluctuated trend, namely there is a gradual climb from 22 °C to above 30°C in the first 3 months to become its maximum figure before plunging down to the lowest one with 20.5°C in July. The temperature continues to soar up by 7.5°C in the period between August and October and after that it comes back to the starting point.

In the terms of precipitation, we can see that there is a stable rise around 23 mm in January and February before the quadruple growth in March. Noteworthily, after reaching the highest number throughout the process with 280 mm in April, it dropped rapidly to roughly 20-30 from June to September. However, in the next 2 months, the graph shows an opposite tendency with an upsurge to the fivefold previous data, followed by a reduction of 110 mm in December, which is just one third as much as that of the figure in November.

Overall, obviously, precipitation and temperature have the relatively direct inclination. Specifically, in January and December, both of them are low; meanwhile in March-April, they indicate the highest number, by contrast, in the period of next 5 months, their numbers are the lowest.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87826086957 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81017594589 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613043478261 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7948511628 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.25 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210925410318 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951061134318 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159449888699 0.0843802449381 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163184674405 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197205948171 0.0819641961636 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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