No one can deny, in this cutting-edge era, the tend of remote learning is rapidly rise among the students. It has a several benefits for students as well as for educational institutes. Few people reckon that, conventional education will be replaced by the online method of education because it has numerous benefits. Apart from this, traditional method of education is more productive rather than online learning so, people believed that it is irreplaceable. I also agree with this statement. In this easy, I shall pen down the both sides and give my opinion.
To commence with, although, e-learning brings ample of advantages. With the help of technology students attend the class anywhere and anytime alongside teachers also deliver the lesson though the videos instead of give the same things again and again in classrooms. Nevertheless, remote learning extremely beneficial for those student who live far from universities or schools. It is convenient way for study and get the degree. Moreover, this modern method of education also affordable for those student who not able to pay overheat costs of institutes because students able to attend lecture though smart phone or computers. According to my prospective and experience, no doubt, online class brings a several benefits but students are face the lot of problems, because they have a lot of doubts and they unable to clear those problems in online classes.
On the other hand, some people argue that traditional method of learning is never replaced with remote learning and I also agree with this point. To explicate, First and foremost, students attend the class with more interest and attentions rather than online classes rationality behind this tutor deliver the lesson front of the students and student as well as teacher able to clear the all problem at the same time. Secondly, in face to face classrooms student also learn the practical things which is not possible in online classes. Moreover, some students are less interested in study and they not give any attention to their study so in virtual classrooms teacher motivate the student to learn the lesson and get the best score in exams. According to my perception, traditional method of study is best way in order to learn something for get good grades in examination.
To conclude, e-learning method is the best way for study because it more convenient things. On the other hand traditional method is more effective for those students who less interested in study and not able of do study online.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, as for, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09156626506 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70746885012 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46265060241 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2681628099 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.210526316 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230144173742 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798106151788 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723339728317 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156943251655 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844504503765 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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