It is true that, in this contemporary era, crime is being escalated day by day in all over the world mostly in youngsters and it is a worrying trend. Furthermore, government should start some campaign, attention should be given by parents and so on.
To start with, there are numerous points on this. Firstly, television and smartphone are the responsibile for this cause because children like watching action movies and try to use these things in their life. Secondly, parents are bussy in their own work and they do not take care of their children that is why they prefer to adapt bad habbit or fall in the bad communities.Another reason could be, unemployment rate is being increased steadily teenagers do not have much job for doing and that is why they prefer to take some heinous steps like kidnapping, murder, robbery in banks and homes and so on.
Looking on the solutions, a numbers of camping should be started by government in which they provide good moral lessons to children in funny ways. In addition, government should also pass some draconian rule against these type of channels which provide wrong content and endeavour to provide new job opportunities for people. Moreover, parents' must give some time to their children and go out for picnic with them so children feel far better as compare to anything.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly crime is increasing we know very well and it is not good for our societies or for country as well yet, we must understand that parents also play a vital role in children life they should always support their children in everything and government should provide some laws against these type of thing.
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Suggestion: Another
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8661971831 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68222972143 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.892869799 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.555555556 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4444444444 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0959737276729 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424869662778 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241876226814 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605283988157 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231472570417 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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